Redundancy Improved version Tautology Improved version

 

Ahead of schedule   early                    a total of three reasons three reasons    

Almost all                most, the majority brief in duration        brief

Along the lines of    similar to            completely destroyed destroyed

As well as                also, and              current status             status

At all times              always                  end result                  result

Conduct a review of review                  first began                began

Give consideration to consider                   mutual agreement     agreement

In advance of          before                         potentially dangerous  dangerous

In possession of      have/has                shorter in length       shorter

Is able to                   can                         true fact                      fact

With a view to         for                         usual habit                 habit

 

Activation

 

Rewrite the following piece of text, removing any vague or redundant language.

 

Following the completion of their first draft, overseas students from abroad often choose not to recognize the fact that their essay is in possession of an excessive number of words. For many, their usual habit is to avoid carrying out an evaluation of their work. The honest truth of the matter is that the majority of students do not proofread properly. Proofreading, on most occasions, is too brief in duration. Students do not want to edit their work in case they need to make their essay longer in length.

 

 

 

                  What are collocations and how can we use them?

 

                                       “You shall know the word by the company it keeps”  

  

                                                                                                           John Firth            

Reflection

Look at these pairs of words. Circle the phrase which you think is most commonly used in English.

-fast car/quick car                   -fully recognize/completely recognize

-fast shower/quick shower      -fully broken/completely broken

-smoke fatly/ smoke heavily   -cause problems/provide problems

-make homework/do homework -have a job/work a job

 

The word education has many collocations. Think of as many as you can.

 

 

 

Contextualization

 

Read the following passage, identify any collocations and complete the table.

Collocations are particularly useful in academic English, and indeed when students are taught abut the topic, their interest levels are generally high. At least, this is what the research indicates. Reading critically is a good way of developing your understanding of collocations. One of the key criteria in using collocations is identifying the frequency with which they appear together.

Verb + noun

Verb + adverb

Noun + verb

Noun +noun

Adjective + noun

Adverb+ adverb

Adverb+ adjective     particularly useful   

 

Note      It is important to distinguish academic or political collocations from idioms. Idioms (such as up to the minute or figure something out) tend to be more informal, and therefore are not much used in academic English. Phrasal verbs may also be categorized as collocations, but these are generally considered too informal for academic or political writing as well.

 

The following table provides a list of useful collocations used generally in academic language

 

Verb + noun                                                                   

-develop + an understanding/a framework/ a plan         

-do business/an experiment/ homework                   

-find an answer/a solution/time                                 

-follow advice/an example/a procedure                     

- give a definition/a description/an explanation         

- make an attempt/ a criticism/a reference/an effort

- reach an agreement/a conclusion/a decision

-submit an application/an essay/your resignation

-take an opportunity

 

Noun + verb                                                              Adjective + noun

 

-the research indicates/shows/demonstrates -key criteria/reason/idea

-X’s argument illustrates/ justifies/supports -major problem/ issue/ challenge

-the figure shows/reveals                           -detailed /in-depth/ground-breaking                                                                                                                                                                                           

Adverb+ adverb                                                                                research

                                                                     -specific argument/reason

-much more /less                                          -present/current study

-almost certainly/entirely                             -previous studies

-very interestingly/importantly/noticeably   -significant differences

 

Adverb+ adjective                                                        Noun+ noun

- particularly useful/challenging/ important - sample size

- -significantly higher/ different/changed    -data set

- relatively interesting/important/high         -control group

                                                                        -quality assurance/control

 

Verb + adverb

- reading critically/carefully/with interest

- strongly suggest/argue

-dramatically increase/ change

-fundamentally change/disagree

-recently develop/arrive/start

 

Activation

 

Using a collocation dictionary and/or the corpus-based collocation website

http://www.collins.co.uk/Corpus/CorpusSearch.aspx, identify which words collocate with the following; and in what order.

 

Word                                                                 Collocates

Development   (D) noun            economic D, early D, rapid D, industrial D,

                                                    child D, language D, research and D,

                                                     D grant, facilitate D.

                                                             

 

Significant (adjective)

 

 

Completely (adverb)

 

 

Confidence (noun)

 

 Indicate

(verb)

 

              What phrases are commonly used in academic writing?

                     ”After people have repeated a phrase a great number of times,

                     they begin to realize it has meaning.”

                                                                                                 H.G.Wells

 

In what circumstances would you use the following phrases in academic writing?

1. The structure of the:   Description (e.g ., the structure of the double helix is as follows)

2. The role of the:                     --------------------------------------------------------3. One of the most:                  --------------------------------------------------------

4 At the beginning of:              --------------------------------------------------------

5. In contrast to:                         -------------------------------------------------------6.In the second section:          ---------------------------------------------------------

 

Contextualization

Read the following passage and identify any academic phrases which are frequently used in academic writing. An academic phrase may be defined as a group f three, four or five words which often appear together. They may be considered as a kind of collocation.

 

Academic phrases, also known as’ lexical bundles’, are an important feature of academic discourse. One of he most important reasons that you should use these short, formulaic phrases is that they are a common feature of academic writing. As well as this, academic phrases can lessen certain grammatical problems which you might face. It should be noted that academic phrases are not a complete solution to grammatical problems; at the same time, they may offer a partial solution. As a result, it is clear hat a god understanding of these three-, four-and five-word phrases is one of the key ways you can make your writing sound more ‘academic’.

 

Common lexical bundles


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